关键要点
- 用日常词、简单句:越好读,读者 engagement 越深——花在文字上的力气少了,留给想法的就多了,也更能读到最后。
- PG 的目标叫 saltintesta(仿 saltimbocca跃入口中):想法跃入你的脑子,你几乎注意不到运送它们的文字。
- 写简单是体贴:为 impress 人而写 fancy,是让读者替你扛长长的裙摆;且很多读者母语非英语,理解力远超英语水平,不能因话题难就用难词。
- Fancy 的写作还能掩盖没想法——有人就靠这个藏拙;而写简单逼你诚实:简单地说出 nothing,所有人(包括你自己)都看得出来。
- 简单的东西更长寿:未来的读者和今天的外国读者处境一样,文化和语言都会变;耐久不是偶然,是活儿做得好的标志。
- 但以上都不是主因:主因是写复杂了 PG 自己难受——那不叫 fancy,叫 clumsy;当然,为效果用复杂句/fancy 词可以,但绝不能是 accident;他的方法是初稿快写、然后花几天删,删删删。
—— 本文选自东西书院 dongxishuyuan.com
PG 原话
读者在文字上花的力气越少,留给你的想法的就越多。
The less energy they expend on your prose, the more theyll have left for your ideas.
写简单逼你诚实:如果你简单地说出了 nothing,所有人(包括你自己)都看得出来。
writing simply keeps you honest. If you say nothing simply, it will be obvious to everyone, including you.
我写简单的主因是:不这样写,我自己难受。
The main reason I write simply is that it offends me not to.
出处
- 英文原题:Write Simply(2021年3月)
- 原文:https://www.paulgraham.com/simply.html
- 本书院编译 · 底本为 paulgraham.com 英文原典
中文为本书院编译(意译),关键英文术语保留原文;英文引文逐字核验为原典连续子串。
延伸阅读 · 跨篇互见
想让人读你写的东西,就用口语写:非正式语言是思想的运动服。
Informal language is the athletic clothing of ideas.
If you simply manage to write in spoken language, youll be ahead of 95% of writers. And its so easy to do: just dont let a sentence through unless its the way youd say it to a friend.
场景交集:写作出处:Write Like You Talk · paulgraham.com 原文 ↗
写作与演讲:好想法是写作的大头,却是演讲的小头
写作靠想法,演讲靠表演;想产出好想法就去写作,别去练演讲。
Having good ideas is most of writing well. If you know what youre talking about, you can say it in the plainest words and youll be perceived as having a good style.
With speaking its the opposite: having good ideas is an alarmingly small component of being a good speaker.
场景交集:写作出处:Writing and Speaking · paulgraham.com 原文 ↗
写作,简述:写作不只传达想法,更生成想法
写作不只是传达想法,更是生成想法;67分钟写就的写作清单:先写烂初稿,再反复改。
I think its far more important to write well than most people realize.
Writing doesnt just communicate ideas; it generates them.
场景交集:写作出处:Writing, Briefly · paulgraham.com 原文 ↗
1.0版(之一):好写作是改出来的
PG公开《The Age of the Essay》初稿的删改实录:平均每3-4个词才留1个进终稿,好写作=重写。
As E. B. White said, good writing is rewriting. I didnt realize this when I was in school.
An essay is something you write in order to figure something out.
场景交集:写作出处:A Version 1.0 · paulgraham.com 原文 ↗
本区为 L2 延展案例(跨篇互见):PG 其他原典中的相关论述,仍属原典直读;引文均为逐字核验。解读与主编观点见 L3(筹备中)。